Weak Points:
- There is no career objective nor education background included
Strong Points:
- Current CV looks well organized
- Relevant work experience in clothing retail sales line with notable achievements
- Clear outline of experienced sales and marketing skills with proven results increasing profits
Pay attention to the following points:
- Include Career Goals within the first section
- Include Educational Background
- Completely redo the text descriptions
- Work to improve overall appearance
- Needs editing done
One can also narrow his professional field, for instance, by writing a resume for medical sales to highlight the desired area of work which will make an employer think the person has relevant knowledge and might need a higher payment for his work.
